Take 42
September 26th, 2007
It’s taking a long time to get the initial meeting between Keturah and Lord Death right. Each has to be presented as a strong character but with their own unique vulnerability. This meeting sets the stage for the rest of the story and developing relationship. These are the key points that need to be incorporated into this scene.
“He laughed then, and I saw that he was perilously beautiful, at once terrifying and irresistible.”
“I see you have given me a part in the story,” said Lord Death, and if I could trust myself, I might have thought that he might have said it with a hint of sadness.
No wonder this crucial scene is so difficult to perfect!
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